Bloody hell, this is fantastic! You really do have talent. I can hear their voices as I read it and you've done a smashing job at keeping Hal, Leo and Pearl in character throughout the story. Brilliant!
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I love him, I really do. I mean sickening, stomach-churning love, practicing my signature with his second name kind of love, but I look at him now and I want to pull chunks of flesh from his face.